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The Immortal Wize

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I heard a mother say Just the other day
Please don’t take My son away
 

His father left on Saturday
Filled his heart with sadder days
 

Wasn’t here to teach Him how to play
Please don’t give him Triple Life
I live to see Him Take a wife
 

The mistakes That he made
Have been already paid
She prayed and she prayed
 

For her son in shackles and chains
Standing Before the judge
Like an Auction block slave
 

In the world of boys and girls
Lost in the System souls lost
Paying the systematic Cost
 

How far can they go
With no one to follow
What do they know
 

These questions are rhetorical
 

Left feeling hollow
Because their mind is criminal
Taken lives is all that they know
 

Raging youngsters amongst us

turning into Monsters
 

Created uneducated Gang related
 

Stealing and killing for what they lack
Supporting a mother who’s on crack?
 

In a world filled with Choice
What choice do they have
 

Straight out the Womb Born into doom
full of gloom without a voice in the room

 

 

 

2013 © WIZE DOM



 

 

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chispoken says:

I respect the rhetorical nature of this piece. Good work

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lloydboy35 says:

Yes, Agreed!!! Heartfelt and A Read!!!

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