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Starsanchez
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The break up

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The break up,

just for a second come here for a close up.

I am still not over it,

my heart feels like an empty pit.

I don't know how to recover,

because all I do is suffer.

The words you now say will repeat in my head,

I have so much dread,

my tears are all I can shed,

everything is gone, nothing left to mend.

I smile whenever I can,

and I know I don't want just any man.

No one knows the actions of tomorrow,

right now I'm shot by your bow and arrow.

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bulldognation44267 says:

Well done, that is straight from the heart
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The Immortal Wize says:

Powerful short stack,

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