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Broken Wings ✒

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Daddy never child supported me

He wouldn’t have gave a damn if mama aborted me

He’s just dead to me he just died on me all my life he lied to me

On father’s day I hold this card in my hand
What does Hallmark have to say about a worthless man?

Poems about good men what about the deadbeat dads

Bags packed on Friday after school

He never came never called
My fist went to the wall

All bottled up inside mama didn’t teach me how to cry

All of my emotions take wings and fly

Off the handle too much scandal in my like
My mother was my daddy’s wife

Didn’t stay together long because of too much strife

Sitting on too many secrets is uncomfortable

It’s hard to relax and just let go
Filled with violent rage
Journaling scrawling across the page
I didn’t stay a little girl long

Feels like my sky is gone
Run away from home
Rather be alone
Rather be on my own
No rain to feel
My sky is gone
No sun to heal
My sky is gone
No stars to shine
The birds don’t sing or fly no more

since daddy walked out the door

I don’t see him anymore

Mamas yelling at me because my grades are poor
My fist went to the wall I don’t feel pain no more

Where’s the love and affection

Lost my way given the wrong directions

I played chess with the devil
With just a king and queen

My king is weak and he’s seducing my queen

I need the blood to wash me clean

Can’t stand the heat feels like the sun is falling down
Can’t get no relief until I’m 6 feet underground

I pen these words down feeling penned down

I’m tapped out I’ve had enough

I want to get back up I need my broken wings to mend
I guess I’m ready to fly again
Live again
Try again
Get back on my feet again

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nyny2013 says:

This actually brought a tear to my eye. Not necessarily because i can relate but because i can feel the words through my screen like damn.Keep your head up.
 

DAPHNE says:

Very emotional!i can relate also bc when my parents split up I LOST the girl my dad loves. I'm glad I found that girl, this site and so many women who feel Like I feel and came back like I'm trying to do. Awesome penmanship!!

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The Immortal Wize says:

Thank yo both so much our power is in our truth, let us keep on flowin.

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tretre says:

Total can relate to this poem. Made me gain more insight on how i feel about him. I Would tell you this is another one of your great poems, But you already know that. Keep that pen movin.

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