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lloydboy35
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lightness in the dark

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World Champions(To The Critics)

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life

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to the critics, thanks

through great lengths

to get it

but we did it

a victory so sweet, feel the grit

of their teeth

but if only you felt our pain, the ridicule

and talk

remained cool and walked the walk

when you butchered my name, stayed

comitted for the love of the game

fans never acquitted

a defeat, I conquered, a repeat

was such the monster

divided from haters, confided in

things greater

the ones who believed and knew

I could achieve

feel the heat, the fire, the burns

and one

I earned, i soared, I'm yet to

be done

I yearn for more

the put down and comparisons only

made arrogant

embrace success, in that place I'm blessed

continue to hate, it's what makes me great

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