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I been so busy with maintaining my existence writing has been receiving my cold shoulder. I gotta pick up the pace my third book won't write itself.

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MY SUMMER LOVE (2013)

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-A few of my colleagues defected from Canton, Ohio.

-They gave me reports of her.

-These swell tales set my mind adrift.

-So I blueprinted plans for a quest to obtain her.

-Ya see me being an Aquarius gave me a sign that we were destined.

-I joined a caravan that channeled straight to her.

-Twelve hours later we were at the cusp our encounter.

-With gritrock at my feet I stood in silence.

-Awestruck by her beauty.

-Hypnotized by her wave.

-But it was high noon & I was forced to share her.

-Mentally I devised a scheme for a moonlit rendezvous.

-Upon nightfall I returned.

-With a MP3 Player that roared “On the Ocean” by K-Jon.

-To set the aura.

-A lunar reflection off of her had me reflecting.

-On the stress that comes with being a Cantonian.

-And how being in her presence annulled it.

-I removed certain linens preparing to enter into her.

-The warmth of wetness had me sinking more & more in love with her.

-Aquarius’ are known for their spontaneity.

-So I instantly let her tide whirlpool me into passionate state of tranquility.

-Felicity,

-Submerge me.

-Engulf me.

-And for the umpteenth time I had fallen in love.

-Her name?

-Atlantic Ocean.
 

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The Immortal Wize says:

This is a great poem with a beautiful view,

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love_supreme says:

Very nice.

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The Derrick Terrill Project says:

I ever so kindly thank you. I thank you for taking the time to read it. I thank you for the comments/compliments.
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2b2b2 says:

Masterful Write...enjoyable experience....thanks for sharing....ONE

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The Derrick Terrill Project says:

Thank u also 4 ur time

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