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Drunken perception

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I take one sip then proceed to evade what I grieve, I don't think  Aleve could relieve the headache that this liquor causes me, in this drunken state  everything is not quite what it seems, I remember taking my first sip as a teen, getting to inebriated to see, feeling like I couldn't breathe, though the feeling is warm, it reminds me of my cold heart that's torn, i take a sip and new me is born, taking shots like photography, too emotional to think logically, in this state I'm reminded of what bothers me, It might cause me to cheat because I can no longer receive the thought of monogamy with this drunken perception.....

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Imagination_733 says:

This is short but effective. Well done!

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Just_zeek says:

Thanks

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