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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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Pen etrate ✒ Part three

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The sky is made of vapor
man is trying to fill the hole with paper

why does everything that flies high have a point?

What is the point of a point?

It is only to stab, stick or pierce
If not for that the point is pointless

It is useless unaffected
misguided and directed
a tip u.n.e.r.e.c.t.e.d

this globe of a bubble closed
to protect us from intruders

man has gone and come back
left something open and can’t close it back

the door is open we are interrupted

Evan was contemplating suicide when he was 7
who is Evan a boy interrupted

people want to die and go to heaven
with no proof that there is a heaven

there are some people who want to
believe there is a sector seven

something is in the air
something is seeping through
that opening up there

we were not created to live in the dark
that’s why they sedate and lock us up
when we make a spark

those who built the pyramids were making points
without the point those monuments
would be pointless

If we looked over them into the horizon
would we see something surprising?

be not alarmed have no fear
we are not the only ones here

we must open our minds with a pierce
only a point can make it clear

wake the shepherd from his sleep
time to feed and water the sheep

fatten them up good
for the wolves to eat

what is the point?
When will we ever learn
heading for the point of no return

"DID YOU GET THE POINT"?

 



 

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Imagination_733 says:

All parts of this poem are creative and complex. I found myself wanting to read more. As always, genius! I get the point :)
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chispoken says:

Speechless. Dope

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