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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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 He keeps his secrets in his eyes, He wraps the truth in his lies, Just when i can't say what he's done to me, He comes to me and leads me back to paradise. Maybe i'd fight if i could. It hurst so bad, But feels so good. He opens up just like a rose to me. Anything he'd as me to i'd do.  But lately, i can see in your eyes, broken windows, fallen skies, Baby what you hiding from? The light that followed you around lately nowhere to be found. Don't you know that i'm your place to run.

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The Immortal Wize says:

wow! deeply mastered I almost drowned in this, it left me wanting more.

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tretre says:

Keeping a fellow writer wanting more is the idea. Thank You again.
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kingqadardwon' says:

Very profound. Every line.

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