*how does this sound* dinner just me an you no cell phones no distractions two blunts on each side of the table for before & after dinner next to the sliver forks spoons and knife next to the red wine the perfect candle lit dinner and what's for dinner you may ask well only the finest steak cooked well done with a side of mash potatos and green beans we eat laugh then take sips of the wine after dinner is over we unwinde smoke the second blunt & when that's done i take your hand leading you to your bedroom blue rose puddles cover the floor and the bed as i walk you to the bed you see chocolate kisses forming the shape of a heart and the letters i & you we call room service and tell them to bring the finest oils that they have once they bring it up i lock the doors no distractions as i lay you on your bacc with the oil in my hands rubbing it on your back the coldness from the oil makes your body shiver just a little bit you giggle as I'm given you a deep tissue massage down your spine all the way down to the back of your calfs now massaging your feet coming bacc up slowly kissing your bacc as im still messaging it and continue to put kisses down your spine turning you over kissing you with nothing put passion and honor now i start to kiss the side of your necc the center of your throat making my way down to your chest you want more right?? well guess what happens next
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Tashari's anniversary suprise
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tretre says: Hey thatygpoetickidd, Your poem was good,But i just wanted to give you some advice if i could? For me your poem was kinda hard to read. I had to read it twice to understand what you were saying. Not that it's a bad thing. But you should use basic punctuation so its not really hard to read. Your poem is like a big run-on sentence. I don't mean any disrespect or anything of that nature just some advice from a fellow poet/writer. I look forward to reading more of your poems. :) |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY thatygpoetickidd
ReverseIf you let me walk on the sky Tonight I won't Tell anybody I got you I'll keep it a secret Even if it's just one time let me see things From a higher prospective let me know What's it like to Literally have the Earth beneath my feet better yet with my bacc Against the clouds let me see you now You see all and hide nothing yet I can't see you I can't hear you If you let me walk on the sky Tonight I won't tell anybody I got you...  |
You need a real manYou deserve the best and that's all I've been try to accomplish you deserve the best man the best kiss the best smile it could all be so bliss you deserve the best touch the best affection the best care anything that's best for you i believe you deserve it you've been in and out your comfort zone don't act like i haven't noticed when you're without the things and love that you need you seem to got timed whenever you're sad i picture a blunt in your hands and then i picture your other hand holding down your head as if you're tired as if you're saying you're tired and you're done if i may I'd like to give you a hug and hold your head up to let you know we could be closer then bonny and Clyde i see you as a potential ride or die nah i take that bacc you'll never die the love you have and the heart your carry is something that will be carried on for sentries to come i want other people to be able to look at us and be inspired yeah you have a lot of baggage well let me carry your bags it... |
it'll get betterThe same words he used to lift you up became opposite words that tore you down |
what will do for loveI f the person you was in love with broke up with you over things you consider (bull) |
grown folk bussinessShe sits at the table with nothing but lingerie on rolling a few blunts she is smiling waiting for the moment to see the look of pleasure on his face when he sees what she has done she beings to make some dirty sprite and put it in the freezer for it to get cold she then begins making dinner Bistro Roast Chicken, Pommes Frites with Chives, and finishing with a decadent Fudgy Espresso Soufflé. Is what she is making everything is perfect in her eyes as he walks in threw the door she grabs his coat and gives him a kiss asks how his day was at work all he could do was smile he picks her up an carries her to the shower where they make love oh you want them details? He grips her throat kisses her on the neck lifts her left leg up and penetrates her sucking in her tittes her hands against the wall crying for more he binds her over pulling her with one hand and grips her waste tightly with the other this goes on for hours the both of him get out he gets behind her and says I love you... |
a painful loveit's not love until it hurts, pain evolves into progress & progress is transformed into Passion fuse all that together = a painfully passion to love someone that hurts you |
i do love youi love you not like a friend but something more every time we talk you trigger something in me that just always seems to have me smiling no matter your happiness is of great importance to me i love seeing you smile and when you laugh it's as if all the joys in the word is in your laugher your fuccin beautiful beyond all reasons i can go days with just talking to an never get tired of you that's just how amazing you really are to me |
Tashari's anniversary suprise*how does this sound* dinner just me an you no cell phones no distractions two blunts on each side of the table for before & after dinner next to the sliver forks spoons and knife next to the red wine the perfect candle lit dinner and what's for dinner you may ask well only the finest steak cooked well done with a side of mash potatos and green beans we eat laugh then take sips of the wine after dinner is over we unwinde smoke the second blunt & when that's done i take your hand leading you to your bedroom blue rose puddles cover the floor and the bed as i walk you to the bed you see chocolate kisses forming the shape of a heart and the letters i & you we call room service and tell them to bring the finest oils that they have once they bring it up i lock the doors no distractions as i lay you on your bacc with the oil in my hands rubbing it on your back the coldness from the oil makes your body shiver just a little bit you giggle as I'm given you a deep tissue massage... |