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odonko-ba
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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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what if

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life

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what if

hot dogs were burgers

and fries were onion rings

(i know crazy right)

but what if

what if

we lived on the moon

and the earth our sun

what if

we drank air and breathe water

the grass blue and the sky green

what if 

what if   we fought hate and wage peace

could hitler then have propagate

what if

love was our pledge of allegiance

and our children religion

what if

what if apathy only applied to the universe

what if 

unemployment was overemployment

and depression a bad dream

what if

the electric car was google

and cloning kill cancer

would God forgive us

or would his wrath

flood future temptation

what if

fallen stars are dreams 

and ebola 

a ***ing distraction

what if

reality

is just

memories

would you remember me

or would i die

in the shadow of a distant thought

buried in your mind

forever 

and if money was dirt 

where would the dead be

an alternative source of energy

abortion would provide the gist of that

and if God

were visible

would we see him

or is sodom so enticing

it blinds you so inexplicably

what if

we could live beyond tomorrow

and chase our dreams forever

and the lottery

remained the same

would your luck change

what if

we can do it again

would you do it all  the same.

 

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miss_chaniel says:

what if I ask myself that all the time would u change anything ???? great poem
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tretre says:

Absolutely awesome. I like your mind set. Keep that pen movin!
 

ms.poeticpassion says:

Interesting poem. Nice

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T'ya says:

Great write!

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odonko-ba says:

thanks everyone truly appreaciate it.

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