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Jordanta
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As I return I am excited to announce the release of my book "Love's War on Divorce” available at... http://www.thebookpatch.com/BookStore/loves-war-on-divorce/cce64826-6789-41bf-b135-9f3e2303af68?isbn=9781633188228

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I Can't See Past You

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I Can't See Past You

 

Something is blocking my vision, really obstructing my view; no matter how hard

 

I've tried, I just can't see past you

 

You're standing in my line of sight, obscuring whats up ahead; causing me to

 

miss those key landmarks and saying it's something I misread

 

I may appear to be short sighted, I certainly have my own distant view; but you

 

keep changing your position, making it hard to see past you

 

I'm in the midst of constant motion, while you're in the midst of constant

 

change;all these constant variables, only serves to make things strange

 

Each time I adjust my position, you adjust your stance; with all these never

 

ending adjustments, we don't stand a chance

 

I've tested my vision and it's so plain to me; whether near or far sighted, it's

 

only you that I'm able to see

 

You've affected my depth perception, you're not as close you seem; I don't know

 

what happened, you were once by far my very best dream

 

You're standing so close, that it's only you I see; this just makes it

 

impossible, to see the future me

 

At night we go in circles, as you blind me with you high beams, I just can't

 

win; as soon as I regain my sight, here you come again

 

Lying in my bed I can't even rest, it makes me just want to scream; first I

 

couldn't sleep at night and now you've invaded my daydreams

 

With you stealing my visual substance, the future can never materialize; this

 

non stop strain on my brain, is starting to ruin my eyes

 

It's now like the same old horizon, mounted on my dash; we're headed for our

 

destiny, but in the end is that a crash

 

My bad memories and insecurities, I've learned to subdue; but I can't move any

 

further, until I can see past you

 

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2b2b2 says:

Fantastic Write....Dope viewpoint I sooo can relate to! Thanks for sharing....>ONE
 

Poteic Justice says:

I really love this poem you did a wonderful job :)

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