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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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Scavenger (an excercise in alliteration)

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life

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 a rat roams ravaging for rations

seeks shelter simmering

from a summers storm

amongst brush

bruised and blushed

he fuss and frets

until the rain lets

then scurries scuttle

and skittles away

into the darken day

daintily dazed

he manage his way

through a mouse[y] maze

and into a house

through a crack he creeps

cleverly concealed 

untill a meal he seeks

then out in the open

he silently streaks

towards a prize of cheese he see's

just sitting atop a wooden plate waiting

to be seized

he rushes races radically

forward

redemption

finnally at hand

and upon reaching

the threshold of success

his life ends with a loud bang

without regret

for rats    you see

it's all about

chasing 

cheese

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2b2b2 says:

Fabulous Flip on truth and its consequence......Nice....thanks for sharing!
 

odonko-ba says:

Thank you my brother for taking the time to read and leave a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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