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Watching Her Movie, Move Me

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Once upon a time, eyes spied a vision of seeming beauty

I caught her with a line, because her lines moved me

Sauntering by was a deep plotted mission statement

Telling her she was so fine, she already knew she move me

Grinning in acknowledgment was a clue for a playwright

Five minutes in and I’m already suspended in time watching

Guessing the story but still watching and wondering, performing

As my observation proved to be history in the making

She was my premier and I was red carpet gawking and stalking

Waiting for any movements as her plot lines thickened

Growing impatient in all this screenplaying, desiring action pact

Has me reviewing what has been the 411 of dialogue so far

I said Hello and she said Hi in reply, leaving room for characteristic

Developments of an event not happening yet but possible in movies

Boy meets Girl and its automatically a match made in heaven

Cinematically speaking is not a guarantee of keeping a span of attention

As I fell asleep in recognizance of watching for all the actors and events

Missing the climax by assuming I knew naturally what was happening

Has me still waiting for future release clips of upcoming attractions

Praying for a sequel of her as I can hardly wait for what is next…..

Next time I see her viewing and go all in ….reacting to her moving me!

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bulldognation44267 says:

Beautifully written 2b2b2, "Praying for a sequel of her as I can hardly wait for what is next." - I'm with you brother.
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks
 

Poteic Justice says:

Im feeling this
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks Poetic Justice!

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LP45 says:

Wow, very nice. Who could help but not be captured by your lines? Really liked reading this one.

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