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Written Regret

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This is my written regret something I’ll never forget

For you I’ll kill a rock and make water cry

I’m just trying to say for you how I feel inside

I hid my true feeling behind too much pride

Things went from bad to worse like some kind of curse

Now I’m trying to deal with missing you

I remember coming home one after noon

 Seeing the bags packed sitting by the door

I didn’t have a word to say I spoke too much before

Said the wrong things I wish I had not said

You’re right I’m wrong I wish I could tell you that

Those kinds of things I couldn’t let you see inside of me

You walked out on me I still can’t believe I remember back

Trying to find the words to make it right I tried to recite

 Sitting here trying to figure out what’s next for me

How am I going to cope and wrap my mind around what’s not next to me?

The trunk was full and you could barely close the door

I guess this is goodbye, so long, good luck

I was too stubborn to let you go and let you know

 How bad this hurts and I’ll miss you dearly I’m sincerely

As you drove away tears fell from me like a water fall

I stood outside watching you drive away and I wanted to call

As the car started to fade away out of my sight but not my mind

I wished you would have put it in reverse and back into my life

It’s too late for me too late for you all I can do is lay flowers on top of you

I hope you   can smell the ones I give to you this is my written regret to you

 

 

 

 

 

 

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2b2b2 says:

Eloquently expressed Regret....Beautiful
 

Chris says:

Love knows its way back home

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