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If I Could I Would

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life

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If I could I would bring the moon to your

feet

If I could I would render the galaxy to

you with a front row seat

If I could would scoop you up with the

Big Dipper and bring to you Cinderella

magical slipper

If I could I would bring

to you the brightest star so the world

can reflect how beautiful you are

If I could I would take you away to Venus

for without you life to me is meaningless

If I could I would

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lloydboy35 says:

DOPE!!! ENJOYED THE ANALOGIES!!!!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you sir always appreciative of your astute poetry and comments
 

LP45 says:

Very nice mrmelody7. I had to do a double take for a second there when I saw the title. (I had to be sure my eyes weren't playin' tricks on me. (LOL). I guess great minds think alike. Check out my poem "If I could, I Would". Let me know what you think.

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Alekia Abeni says:

Always a delight to read your work,

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much as is your poetry. Just my lil winter time hobby

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kingqadardwon' says:

Very nice. Thanks for sharing your pieces
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much am a winter hobby poet

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