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If I Could I Would

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life

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If I could I would bring the moon to your

feet

If I could I would render the galaxy to

you with a front row seat

If I could I would scoop you up with the

Big Dipper and bring to you Cinderella

magical slipper

If I could I would bring to you the brightest star so the world could reflect how beautiful you are

If I could I would take you away to Venus

for without you life to me is meaningless

If I could I would

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<3 says:

Love this one..lots of good feelings.

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much, in my haste I left out the next to last stanza If I could I would bring to you the brightest star so the world can reflect on how beautiful you are, Thank you for the read and lovely comment

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PeaceSearcher says:

I love this one especially because the moon and the galaxy is such an interest to me, so wrapping up love in there is magnificent
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you for your kind words PeaceSearcher, majority what I write deals with the cosmos or nature, winter season when I write when I cant get out and about like I want, gives me something to do. I believe you have to go out and experience life then take time to reflect on it, gives you plenty of things to write about
 

Devonte7638 says:

I can vibe with this. I love and sometimes write poems like this. Great job!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much when I do write I like variety so I go into many things thanks again

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minayaJ says:

Clapping....As well to the blogs...Good one my friend.

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much for the applause and comment have always heard if is the biggest word in the dictionary

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