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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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When I was born there was no sun  in the sky

my daddy was somewhere feigning or getting high

my mama went into labor with two black eyes

I came into the world looking down not looking
up to the sky

I was breeched because I was trying to reach and grab hold   of something to pull myself back inside

Daddy stole and sold everything we had

I'm just a product of an angry dad

Mama ran away with me in a shopping bag

I have been holding back these tears now it’s time
for me to cry

I will not drink the hemlock and die

I grasp my pen and let it rain

Pop the cork and pour out my the pain

When I speak I speak poetically I want to touch you with   my words

Careful not to split my prepositions with my verbs

On my journey to the mountain I stopped to drink from the fountain

Take a drink from my cup you won’t get germs

Take a drink from my cup it’s a lesson to learn

Take a drink from my cup then pass take small sips   make it last

To preach is to proclaim To teach is to explain
Don’t cry for me I use the pain

I made it to the mountain it took 50 years
5 decades  1 billion tears

Now can somebody tell me how to get to the other side?

It’s time for me to climb I will not stop until I reach   the top and touch the sunny sky

I will survive I will not drink the hemlock and die
I will fight to stay alive
 
 

Just to get to the other side

Just to get to the other side

Just to get to the other side
 

 

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Poteic Justice says:

that was deep i love the way you word your poetry :)
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2b2b2 says:

Magnificent Word......Namaste
 

paulaskid says:

Dope piece

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lloydboy35 says:

WOW!!! DEEP AND POWERFUL!!! VERY MOVING!!!! I COMMEND YOU FOR MOVING ON WIZE DOM!!!

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