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Poteic Justice
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Forever is not enough

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romance

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Forever aint enough

If I show you all my love

What will happened

The energy between us would be too much

We give each other all our love

Because…

One day we will be underground

And the feelings we had once

Are gone now

But I want it to be forever

The kiss to last longer than time matters

Hug me so tight we become one

Stuck into each other body

Feeling the love we have

Over powering

Day dreams once are now reality

Scared to see that forever is not true

I just want us to be an item forever

Maybe we can leave something in a secret spot together

And as long as our treasure are there

We have a piece of us together

Tears fall as i want it forever

But its the way life was set up before we were born

I know if we were Adam and Eve

We wouldn’t have dare ate off the tree

Knowing that we couldn’t be with each other for eternity

Now we punished because our love is not promising

Tomorrow can be the end for me or you

We don’t know so we just love as much as we can till our time is due

Because we know even if we have forever it wouldn’t be enough for me and you…..

 

 

 

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2b2b2 says:

Beautiful Sentiment....thanks for sharing....Write On....ONE

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Poteic Justice says:

thank you:)

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bulldognation44267 says:

This is absolutely breathtaking!! Thank you for this wonderful work of art. The sentiment as 2b said is beautiful and it's the greatest feeling in the world to feel that way about another human being. I know how that goes, it's awesome. Bless your heart.
 

Poteic Justice says:

awh thank you im glad you were able to enjoy it as well as experience this kind of love...
 

bulldognation44267 says:

Indeed many of the poems I posted on here that were of a romantic theme were about this beloved and sacred person. However a love of this intensity can bring about a great deal of heartache and sorrow. I have just made my way though that. Nevertheless your work is stunning. Thank you!
 

Poteic Justice says:

thank you and you are right if you have a love like this poem it hurts if you lose them,and it surely hurts knowing it want last forever because its so strong... thank you and ur welcome

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