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Moving-on

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 Since day one things have been rocky, you told me i should be happy you chose me, I should be lucky.We tired  to work it out, I told you i was tired of all the worries  doubt.I tried to man up and speak to you like a women, You said you didnt want to heart it, I should just accept it,If i cant you have other men who would. Time and time again i tryed to express how i was feeling, I tryed my best, this was my feelings i was revealing. 

You treated me as if i was invinsible, In return making my life miserable. It seem like your goal was to bring me down, making me feel like a clown. I was the last to know you cheated on me, I gave you all of me no matter how many people didnt agree. In the beginning i was captured by your stare, Now im shatterd and you dont care.

I can't explain, lastnight i saw the fireworks, the kind of pain that never hurts, the one you hate to love thats made for you. There ain't nothing you can do to make me stay with you, I need you to know that i'm letting you go. When your feeling  lost and down, disappointed and jerked around, I will no longer be by your side.

You did everything you could do to make me turn away from you, I need you to know that I am moving on. You never let me see you cry, You locked it somewhere deep inside, Refusing to let me hold you tight, make it alright.

I've been holding on so long, trying to make myself thing nothings wrong, Trying not to let it show. As of right now, this second, this day, this moment, I need you to know that I am moving on and I'm letting you go.

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lloydboy35 says:

I feel the hurt reading this, very emotional, I'm sure most people been through this situation at one time!!! Nice Write!!!

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tretre says:

Thank you lloydboy35. I appreciate you reading my poem and taking time to comment. Thanks again. Keep that pen movin!

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