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Dinner Is Served

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I’ve been hurt before you. I thought there’d be no after you. You caught my attention and reeled me in, only to cook and eat my everything. Frying pan already hot with the oil of past lovers. You felt the situation was too hot, but you never left the kitchen… You just continued to cook and consume different meals… Even if I was a dish! I thought I would be the meal to fulfil your hunger… but the sad reality is: your belly ain’t full but, my plate is clean. You served me well. Seasoned me up like a top chef! Got together all the things that would make me taste better to you. I accepted it because if I was a dish, I wanted to be the only meal you ever wanted to eat!… I let you take complete control of me, change me inside and out! Just to suit you… Just to accommodate your tastes! Because I loved you and only wanted to make you happy. I thought we were in love! The way you ravaged me, I realized only I was in love. You didn’t even take the time to savor me… I thought I was your main course! Truth is I was only an appetizer.

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odonko-ba says:

I'm not a big fan of love poetry but you seem to serve this one up well. Pun intended. Nice work here.
 

Baily says:

Thank You lol. I appreciate the comment
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tretre says:

I read a lot of poetry, but i must say, THIS IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! This poem is so personal. As i was reading this poem, I could envision someone being treated that way. The "Even if i was a dish! I thought i would be the meal to fulfill your hunger....But the reality is, Your belly ain't full but, my plate is clean". I really like how you worked the words. As i was reading that part, I thought about someone just giving all they could until there was nothing left, But that other person was always wanting more. I love poetry like this Amazing Job. Keep that pen movin!
 

Baily says:

Thank you I'm deeply moved by your comment.
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice! I really liked this poem.

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baily says:

Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed it

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lloydboy35 says:

One Word, AWESOME!!!!
 

baily says:

Thank you so very much! The positive feedback is truly inspiring :)

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