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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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I want out of this cage

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Grasping,begging,pulling, pleading,

Fighting, crying, aching, bleeding,

Torn apart, I writhe with rage,

I thrash and tear against this cage.

 

Distrusting, suspecting,hurting, shouting,

Searching, dreaming, trying, doubting,

Hand-like bars form this jail.

I try to flee,but inevitably fail.

 

Banging,screaming,moaning,sighing,

Waiting, longing,hoping, dying,

Kept from flight, I sit in pain.

I'm reaching out to touch the rain.

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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, "the caged bird" sings many songs of keys needed to unlock that which imprisons. Once the short length of chain is removed from the foot of the adult e elephant, in all of its brutal strength, its imprisoned mind still holds the body in check. Once we free our minds, then we are! May your poetic mind continue to break free and write such profound imagery! Peace and Love.

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