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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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a visit of silence

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( written in prison after my moms came to see me)

 

 

 

 

we sat staring silently at one another

without saying a word 

our eyes transfixed 

into imaginitive thoughts

a vigil of the souls betwixt 

mother and son

if ever a painful moment in my life

it is now

to see my mother sitting there

all cried out knowing

i'm the center of her pain

those eyes those beautiful brown eyes

staring intently into my soul

as if      searching for the unknown 

the source of my 

proclivities

for i am 

far from that

which she envisioned me to be

and what per-chance i am to never know

but that she loves me still

and i

she

 

 

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tretre says:

Really nice poem! This just goes to show, how poets can be inspired, no matter where they are. Really nice. Keep that pen movin!

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odonko-ba says:

thanks very kindly my friend.

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