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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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The depth of me

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I got this condition

keeps me on a mission

my heart beats fast

like a panic attack

got me blowing in paper sacks

I need to calm down

I get too overworked

looking at the door

waiting for a knock

or maybe not

I need a drink

I need to think

forget about it

because I can't

I need to slow it down

wish I could smoke a blunt

if I do I wont have a  job

I need a cigarette

but I don't  need cancer

in my breast

or cardiac arrest

these are the things

I confess

I want to dance

with the devil

and still go to heaven

this is honesty

I know God hears me

and knows me well

no lie I can tell

I feel like I'm

in the depths  of shoel

where I abode 

trying to stay clean

to save my soul from hell

 

 

 

 

 

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2b2b2 says:

SNAPS.....true life!
 

SensationThePoet says:

Deep, i enjoyed the read.
 

NternallyMe says:

I really love this - it's so relatively real.. This is something all of us have experienced at some point in our lives.

 

Just_zeek says:

Dope write and honest!....you're not alone in the struggle

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