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Slowly

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She is slowly

but surly

slowin me down

stopping my runnin around

Just hangin out with

the fellas

does no good

when I tella

Finding ways to

keep me close

Spoilin me silly

when I just

wanna  be

just chillin

Caught in her noose

she not turnin me loose

Slowly she is numbering

my days

    when

only I wanted out of life

was to play

Slowly but surly she is

doing it her own

very own subtle way

Slowly

 

 

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2b2b2 says:

Being caught up or allowing ourselves to be caught sometime can be a good thing!
 

mrmelody7 says:

Nothin like the chase different when the hunter get captured by the game
 

<3 says:

I like this!! 2b2b2 is right sometimes its a good thing!! :)

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Poteic Justice says:

im feeling this :)
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Lady heart I agree with the both of you sometimes its a good thing
 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you Poetic Justice your user name would make a good title for this

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NternallyMe says:

Interesting and thought provoking!! I love this one!! thanks for sharing! Chea

 

mrmelody7 says:

Thank you again for the read and comment, I am a free spirited guy and I really hate when someone is tryin to spoil me, but when they don't give up its just crazy

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NternallyMe says:

Nothing wrong with being a little spoiled, it's when people stop paying attention to you that you need to be concern..

 

mrmelody7 says:

Hard being popular, people know me from playing sports, especially basketball, and people love the music I listen too, between the partying and clubbing, I just love livin in the boonies now as long as you got transportation to get out when you want

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kingqadardwon' says:

Nice, steady flow

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much King
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice flow!

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mrmelody7 says:

Thank you much latin_lover

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Ms.PoeticPassion says:

Very Nice!!!

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