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Ak Rio
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lightness in the dark
In the clouds

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My Thunder

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 I wonder 

Will they love me when I'm gone 
Maybe if I go hard enough in my songs
If I fight hard through twelve rounds
Will my dad come around
Will my mom say she proud
I wonder will
The thunder 
continue to come from 
the clouds
Or the crowds 
that surround while 
I'm spitting my feelings
No chilling 
Trying lift the ceiling 
Off the building
Clumsy 
As I am 
I collide with the stars
I'm going too fast
Flowing too hard
trying to go far
On this road to riches
I wonder will 
The thunder 
continue to come from 
the clouds
Or the crowds that surround
while I'm spitting 
my feelings 
Trying the lift the ceiling off the building
 

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COMMENTS

 

tiny says:

This is really a powerful and touching poem!
 

Ak rio says:

Thanx
 

LP45 says:

Very nice work Ak rio. Thanks for sharing.
 

Ak rio says:

Thank yu

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