My poetry is like the lyrics to a song I have written , but can't find the emotions to add . the beat I have is the type of flow that makes you wonder "what's next ?" . I can turn my pain into a poem of love .... and make it seem like nothing was ever wrong. I feel the electricity flow through my hands .. giving me that feeling that I'm extrordinary. some people may put my work down , may never appreciate it... but they didn't write it. they didn't give me the gift of poetry . they could NEVER have style , rythm , and talent like mine. there is no other like me , im one of a kind , like a special flower that stands out more than the others... ha , see what I mean ?
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Number3 says: I see it! Inspiring write Poetess |
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