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tretre
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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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 Every moment a new beginning, every day an untimely end. Every night is filled with mirrors of every dream crawling through my skin.   I wake the next morning and live once more, physically drained and mentally torn. I sit and ponder and place my thoughts, but unsuccessfully mend the chasms of my staggered memory.   Looking forward I glimps the past, and thinking back get caught in waves of the future and what I've done. Though, try as I may, I can't glimpse me-I'm gone at last.   Concealing my thoughts, I fight through another day. Playing the fool, I explain my actions; but my earnest persuasion falls on deaf, mocking ears. Who is the fool? Judge yourself first before condemning me.   Who can be told what must be said; what words can be trusted to my greatest enemy? How can i explain god and freedom in their purest form to the tainted church and the corrupt leader.                                              

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DreamPoet says:

I feel this poem..I feel like this sometimes. Another great poem ma.

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tretre says:

Thank you DreamPoet! Purhaps you should write more poems yourself. I've read both of yours and like them.. Why not write more? I hope you do...Keep that pen movin DreamPoet!
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Number3 says:

" Who is the fool? Judge yourself first before condemning me."...Nicely done tretre...Thought provoking...a 10/10 for me. WORD UP

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