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Getting Into Louise

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Its wasn't so easy to please Louise
Her surroundings had me queasy
As she assured me to relax and breathe easy
So exporting my wealth, I went for delph
Swift and sure ole Louise did melt
As I was choking off her entrance
She did began to pant and spoke of repent
But I had change, afterall I wasn't even spent
Serpentine indulgence, producing sweating
Bravado quoting Louise, was now begging please
Please don't leave from between my knees
As she began to shout, a felt moisture all about
Produced from a sneeze of potion producing
Lubrication, but now sure, I knew I had to stay in
She wiggled and try to haggle, clutching and squeezing
As now I teased and pronounced to Louise
That she was all talk...and tease, but 'deez came to please!
 

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The Immortal Wize says:

lol very good!

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2b2b2 says:

(winks) thanks Wize

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