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lost soul

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she spreads her legs thinking that will keep a man

not knowing self respect and realationships go hand and hand

every week she finds a new love

that got her hooked like drugs

no quality time spent with her youngin

name brand clothes and toys is the way she shows lovin

all the claims of independance are false

men spend a few weeks with her and there intrest is lost

dudes tell her anything she wants here

promises of trips and wips and the flyest gear

truth is shes never missed

they hit and they split  then they dont want her near

used and abused still claiming shes the flyest

but that pillow at nights her only comfort while shes crying

lost soul pretending to be free

no control and more then nieve

having a man wont make you complete

get to know a man first befor hitting the sheets

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

WOW!! nail on the head truth be told.

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PeaceSearcher says:

This is great poem, keep up the good work. Keep talking from the heart. The best poems are the best when they show true emotion
 

substance914 says:

Thanx yall

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2b2b2 says:

Ka-BOOM....Crucial PSA (Public Service Annoucement)....thanks for sharing!
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Deep

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