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lightness in the dark

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Counterclockwise

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 Frozen in time,right before my eyes

suddenly my life reversed counterclockwise

moving right along with no hesitation

I begin to move backwards

I lost concentration

reminiscing about my past history

entertaining doubt,confusion and misery

driven to despair from the effect of my condition

blinded my thoughts I lost my position

"Lo and behold" I was set free

ambition came to rescue me

moving forward with my eyes set on the prize

never to revisit counterclockwise.

 

 

 

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The Immortal Wize says:

I love these 2 lines... 1. blinded my thoughts I lost my position 2.ambition came to rescue me

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catmartan says:

Thanks Wize Dom!!!

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