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just different 1 min read 667 views Dec 13, 2013

Nickel Plated

I’m like an Eveready
 

so forever ready
 

no trembling
 

keep it steady
 

hold it still
 

stay in position
 

two I’s in vision
 

I see through
 

like a telescope
 

the 25th parallel
 

planet hope
 

minds clearly
 

on good dope
 

spitin fire like
 

a sore throat
 

strike fear in goats
 

falling down
 

like hit with the
 

Holy Ghost
 

breaking bread
 

with the most
 

burn it up
 

call it toast
 

pour the wine
 

give a toast
 

time to roast
 

put the truth in a joke
 

laugh till you choke
 

cough up a lung
 

from this smoke

 

 

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catmartan

AWESOME!!!!! Thanks 4 sharing

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