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tretre
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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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Body Wars

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life

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 Flesh and floods of silken mane

cascade the flawless frame,

Conspiracy of chromosomes, confliction of interest,

body of the two part

Staggering of the weighted demon

hardened to hypocrisy; tantalizing

biceps,triceps, misconceptions in depth

of the wonders in the night

Lips painted, eyes glazed, beauty sparks the

rage of confused pain; take it as it comes

comes into the recesses of childhood

exploration

land of wonderment and glory, reach and find

the answers to yourself, deeper and deeper

the search continues.

In a moment of reality checking in,

open yourself to mysteries of the other world

Enclse the saneness and oneness

in your center............

 

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Contest Winner  

The Immortal Wize says:

Woa!! there must be a story behind this, good to see back in the swing again.
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tretre says:

Thank you Wize Dom! Its always a pleasure to receive a comment from such a talented poet such as yourself. Congrats on your ruby status.

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love_supreme says:

This poem had so many places where you could touch and feel the words.
 

royale jones says:

I love the message of finding yourself and adding some depth to yourself in the poem.
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2b2b2 says:

Tight Play....Bravo

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