PeaceSearcher
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first love
As I watch this movie play,
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The Immortal Wize says: Love it! |
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love_supreme says: There is a quiet resilience about this poem. |
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Artist JoeMac says: short, but striking. nice |
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PeaceSearcher says: Thank you Wize Dom, latin_lover, and joemac619! I try to use only my true feelings so my writing can be deep and another person can feel the emotion as my words are read |
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Number3 says: wow...thought enticing...provoking and excellent. Word Up! |
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PeaceSearcher says: Thank you Number3 I thought making it provoking would help me get out how the words needed to |
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mrmelody7 says: Yeah such is life, hangg in there as you learn you grow, why let someone else ruin your life, its short, enjoy it while you can |
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DallasCowgirl says: Very beautiful |
OTHER POEMS WRITTEN BY PeaceSearcher
As it rainsAs I watch this movie play, And as it rains,
And death dances in my head
It's possible to give away your heart,
And in the end it's crumbled,
Pieces are left on the floor scattered,
Thoughts fly through my head,
Of a beautiful life now to want to be dead.
Everything is in the eye of the beholder,
The fire now starts to smolder.
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