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lightness in the dark
Love First and Love Lasts

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Mind Blowing

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A flash of light too quick to measure
Reaching me like yesterday’s review
As thought bends time and space
Arrival out of the dark for goodness sake
Awaken in blinking
Characterized by a yawning orifice
Sound is profoundly late in its arrival
As my surprise catches up to form…….
OH S H ! T…..is my utter amazement
Before my very eyes, not believing
Seeing a new spectacular arrangement
Changing equations and formulas forever
Forced recovery from this discovery
Covers me from head to toe tingles
After all these years of tears from fears
At last, doubts are discounted…..
As she softly whispers in to my ear……
Heightening my simultaneous levitation
Elevating my senses to overflowing eruptions
Succeeding in ballistic blowing impressions
Upon my mind in accepting this invitation!
 

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chispoken says:

I love the play on time spectrum here and the overall words you choice. The diction here was sick. Keep up the great work.
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The Immortal Wize says:

Yeah word play to the forplay, very well laid #$@

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2b2b2 says:

Thanks much Wise
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2b2b2 says:

Thanks my brother....ONE

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DeeliteNMe says:

Beautifully written!!!

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love_supreme says:

Very nice!

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