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LP45
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lightness in the dark
Hey there my fellow poets! Blessings and greetings to you all for a prosperous new year. Life has been pretty rough for me since I last posted but nonetheless, as always with God's mercy and grace I've persevered. I'm finally at a point where I can start posting again. I so miss being on here and reading everyone's works. I hope that everything is going well for everyone. Let's keep the inklove flowing!

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At First Glance

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romance

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From the first moment I saw you
Some way, somehow I knew
That you were the one for me
And I was the one for you.

I couldn't put my finger on it
I wasn't sure exactly what to feel.
Whatever it was, it felt damn good
That's when I knew it was real.

What was the connection?
Why was this vibe so strong?
Had this been the love
I've been waiting for so long?

Apparently so I thought
So I decided to take a chance.
When I kissed you I could tell
You were mine at first glance.

All the right feelings
In the wrong places
Trying ever so desperately
Not to leave any traces

Behind, lying around or otherwise
Only trying to bide my time
Until the one I was in love with
Would once and for all be mine.

So therefore we must
Be careful with each stance
Especially when you feel
The love at first glance.

©2006

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COMMENTS

 

iiAmPoetry says:

I really love this... and I love to read others poems out loud in a spoken word tone and I really love how this came out.

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RTLUVJ says:

love this one too,

 

LP45 says:

Thank you iiAmPoetry. I've yet to master the spoken word rhythm but i am working on it.
 

LP45 says:

Thank you again RTLUVJ.
 

blakmista says:

Thank You ladypoet45. A patient perspective in a not so patient world. Great flow!
 

LP45 says:

Thank you blakmista for your continued support. It's much appreciated.
 

veelay@hotmail.com says:

hey this is a good one, -by you LP45 :)

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LP45 says:

Thank you veelay. I'll be reading more of your works too. Thank you for your support. Peace and blessings.
 

love_supreme says:

An absolute legend, excellent write.

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LP45 says:

Thank you love_supreme!

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