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LP45
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lightness in the dark
Hey there my fellow poets! Blessings and greetings to you all for a prosperous new year. Life has been pretty rough for me since I last posted but nonetheless, as always with God's mercy and grace I've persevered. I'm finally at a point where I can start posting again. I so miss being on here and reading everyone's works. I hope that everything is going well for everyone. Let's keep the inklove flowing!

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Subway Stop

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A warm summer's night
Waiting on the train
Missed one by a minute
As we wait for another to come again.

Small talk conversations
Keep things going along
Too much silence makes things
Seem uneasy like something's wrong.

The crowd begins to grow
Even though we started out as few
The light flashes for the train
We all stand on cue.

The train is somewhat full
Standing is by preference only
Offering some one to sit with you
Keeps things from being too lonely.

My reflection rides with me
In the dark and tinted glass
One last stop 'til I get off
So I can go home alas!

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Number3 says:

beautiful imagery, never been on a train and i can feel how it is...Nice one, Word up
 

SoFloetic says:

Nice
 

LP45 says:

Thank you Number3 and SoFloetic.

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2b2b2 says:

Superb Capture

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LP45 says:

Thank you 2b.

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