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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
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Drinking from a dirty water glass
In the best diner in town
The waitress comes around
To check on me am I alright
Do I need any thing?
I just want to jump up screaming
Yes I do I need everything
That life has to offer and more
Scribbling on a napkin beside me
Trying to capture feelings inside me
In a den of conversations that surrounds me
I am not insane, I am though
But no one has to know
I could complain about the stained glass
Get loud belligerent and make a scene
No thanks I’m fine
I don’t need anything but a paper cup
and another napkin please
 

 

 

 

 


 

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royale Jones says:

Beautiful capture of a moment.nice!

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Wordman21 says:

Very entertaining...Like this
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2b2b2 says:

True Artistic Capture....Much Respect...thanks for sharing!!

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love_supreme says:

I dont see how I missed this one. Excellent write.

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