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Mahogaredbrown
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in my feelings and confused PT 2 the end

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romance

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 I'm so tired of you making big things out of something so little 

then you question my actions 

Hold on

let's keep it civil

Cause your insecurities got make believe thoughts in your mental 

If it's not what you wanna hear

you make difficult out of something so simple 

You say you tit for tat

call up a bad bi**h and rekindle 

I'm choosing words like *** you ..burning sentimentals

This feels like..... 

Ivan's raging winds... Stepping barefoot on metal bristols..... Alcohol on razor cuts when screaming words of dismissal 

Ripped to pieces and left alone to die

But I just can't let him go 

Cause it even hurts when I miss him

Balistic cries 

Feelings pouring out my eyes 

Prince in disguise 

Shut up be quiet and listen 

Just listen 

Nawl really you don't have to

Confusion to understanding I see you

The real you

Behind pleasure was deceit

Lies mistaken for words 

Heart was protected 

then defeated by hurt

Real you claim to be but the real was in me........ 

 

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COMMENTS

 

love_supreme says:

There is a lot of feeling in this poem. Good write.

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Mahogaredbrown says:

Thanks
 

royale Jones says:

Man! Great story of a first heart break Anne self worth.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Very touching

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SoFloetic says:

This is really good

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Mahogaredbrown says:

Thanks Alot you guys and gals that's means alot I just starting writing this year..
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2b2b2 says:

Magnificent.....got my heart racing....lol....Bravo

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