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The Intruder:

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 I sit here tonight at my window

watching the rain fall swiftly.

Knowing once it was held gently,

in the softness of a cloud;

until an intruder came, causing friction,

and the soft cloud burst

letting go the rain in many drops.

I sit here tonight thinking, how much like

the soft cloud and the rain, you and I are

knowing once I was held gently,

in the strongness of your arms;

until a intruder came, causing friction,

and my loving heart burst

letting go the tears in many drops.

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2b2b2 says:

Great Rumination....thanks for sharing....ONE
 

Wordman21 says:

Memories, Great Write thank you

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