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TempesttB
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erotic

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Baby. Tell me wat u want...
 
Your breath crept around my neck
Your voice sliding down my spine 
Like a flower in a field of  possibilities
Her Ora draped around me 
Playing kiss and tell with my energy 
 
Touch me....
My head tilted back my bod screams touch me please.... feel wat u can already see 
I was yours and you were mine letting your wetness fill inside of me making a perfect trail to my ecstasy 
 
Cum for me baby... 
Your words trickled down my breast between my legs  
I'm shaking...
Our souls exchanged vows while our bodies exchanged juices and .....
I liked it....
It feels so real 
Waking up to work cloths and blaring tv this is now were in suppose to be 
Were am it 
Realizing that I am here and u are there broke me ripping a hole in my eternity 
But I would do it again and again until I had no breath left in me letting our bodies dance on a bed of rose petals u comfort me even if it was only in my dreams.

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love_supreme says:

This is a very powerful poem. Good write. Keep it flowing.
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The Immortal Wize says:

You hold a mighty pen.
 

Jay Beach says:

Love to read a good and visual erotic poem. Love the line "Our souls exchanged vows while our bodies exchanged juices." Very powerful.

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LILNIMO says:

PRETTY INCREDIBLE...THE VISUALIZATION IS AWESOME...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK OF ART MY SISTA!!!

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