Admiring the stars I lay, gasping for breath.
In awe I.I go slightly comatose, taking a deep.Observing, eyelids closing, a closer view?Into myself I stare.Page by page, memory by memory and thought for thought.Envision a change, slight change, rearrange, puzzles pieces missing.I search.The galaxies, moons, planets I see.Statuesque.Symmetrical depiction.Double lens, opaque views under microscopes.The slopes.Up and down.Life's roads.Different lanes, narrow, shallow, halo's..down below.Looking up.Ground level, unbelievable, superficial.Detailed illusions.Searching for stars.Blinded by the suns rays.Ground level displays.
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The Immortal Wize says: Fire mane!!! |
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Majestic says: I've felt this way for three years man! Word up! |
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SoFloetic says: This is good |
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Number3 says: thank you, to majestic, we can relate, hope you through it though...Word Up. |
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