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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
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Farfetched

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This city smells like
Blood to me
Walking alone
In these streets
I have no home
Where did it go?
I don’t know
It use to be
Right here
Now it’s gone
Where can it be?
Where is my family
Smoke in my hair
The fire rose up
From the ground
Like a dragon coming up
From the sea
It’s too dark to see
In front of me
Man on the moon
Looking down on me
I have no ladder to climb
If I did find a way
They’ll just push me
Back down

 


 

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Majestic says:

Brilliant, puts a picture in the mind immediately, multiple meanings and truth! Love it

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SoFloetic says:

Great write
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2b2b2 says:

Superb Parlance!!
 

Wordman21 says:

Great realism and love the flow. Great as always
 

paulaskid says:

I love it!

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xclusive says:

Nice write!

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haakimuallah says:

congratulations on "Instill"...

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blakmista says:

Eddie Money said Two tickets to Paradise. My friend, you have one of those...Peace!

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