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lightness in the dark

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Your 1st heartbreak

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 Remember your first heartbreak

it almost took your breath away

felt you were on the edge

you just wanted to die

let yourself go,loosen the grip

and wave yourself goodbye

looking down you could see peace

beneath the waves

with eyes running like a water faucet

you were tearing up for days

sitting by the phone

waiting for that call

laying in the bed

staring at the walls

thinking to yourself

theres no one else for me

that was the only person

in the world you could only see

now you look back

and understand why

 was'nt even worth it

now your glad they said goodbye.

 

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SoFloetic says:

I love this it made me reminisce
 

catmartan says:

THANK YOU!

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The Immortal Wize says:

Yes indeed!
 

DallasCowgirl says:

Felt this one! You find out that it gets better though. Thanks for sharing!

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