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Majestic
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Making a come back, sorry have been away for a while, have been busy writing :) namaste to you all xxx

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Broken hearted before it's begun

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Up against an unlikely opposition,
Something unnoticed by those who the opposition requires to see,
Why do I feel threatened? 
Perhaps because the opposition is more important than me,
Why can't I just let it go? 
Non contact is noticed too vividly,
I don't deserve a war I never asked for,
But I'm looking like I'm gonna be beat,
Perhaps I wanna give in to easily?
I'm over sensitive to the little things,
I just wanna feel like the centre of your world,
despite how I try, you get more than enough of me.
Seems my opposition has your eye,
Even though that relationship would reasonably be denied.
You make me think I'm mad,
That this war I didn't ask for, started in my eyes,
You're gonna end up losing me. 
Where is your passion? It was there but now it's gone! 
Where is your loyalty? I know you inside out, here's where you belong,
Are you going to fight for me? 
I doubt it, I lost the fight a long time ago, the chance has gone. 
Rivers of words that once flowed fluently have dried up quicker than an empty bong,
I realise I'm no competition, I just never realised there was one. 
Consideration isn't owed, clearly, not to me,
I'm just the messenger, the stepping stone, a blanket, a safety. 
You believe you can do better but you will be surprised, 
I was more than enough for you, I just couldn't control your eyes. 
Although I shouldn't have had to..
I dress up for you to notice and you don't,
I tell you what I need, do it you won't,
See all the time you weren't noticing me, I was noticing that everything that we had, was diminishing. It's all gone, before it's begun,
Who am I now, where do I go, what do I do? Why didn't you want me? 
It doesn't matter anymore, the love is dead, we were never meant to be. 
 
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mzsopriceless says:

This describes my feelings at the moment perfectly. Everything you said spoke directly to me! AMAZING WRITE

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Majestic says:

Sorry your feeling that way, pleased it spoke to you though! Thanks for the comment!!

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