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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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I cannot fix what I did not break

I need to learn to ask for help to do things

I cannot do for myself often what I seem to do for someone else

My super intentions and heroic efforts

Can’t seem to put me back together again

Feeling like I’ve taken all I’m going to take

With more on its way rushing in like the wind

One thing after another don’t get along with each other

With no breaks in between pure exhaustion

After another hit tears fall with no pause

Mind swept clean just passing through with my dream

Held gently in my palms clutched tight to hold on

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2b2b2 says:

Sounds like every other day....ONE...Write On!
 

scash102 says:

I can relate.

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