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tretre
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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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You Don't Know:

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 You don't know what I've been through.....

You don't see the pain....

You can't see I'm a dotted line along this page...

I hide behind this smile...

Underneath I'm fractured....

Everyday waking up to every little thing wrong,

Looking for peace of mind in this soul of mine....

Everyone all around me doesn't realize

that I'm here on my own.....

Headphones on, music turned to the max,

trying to escape me, but it works temporarely, 

forced to accept this is my reality....

So I hit the blunt.....get  messed up....trying to forget....

Everyone else think, I'm living the life,

but no one knows I'm dying inside.....

You don't know what I've been through.....

You don't see the pain.....

You can't see I am dotted line along the page...

 

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twistedbeauty says:

there are a lot of people who are going through the same things you are you just have to take the time to find them. stay positive
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TamaraD says:

Preach I like this a lot yea I feel u

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tretre says:

Thank you TwistedBeauty for taking the time to read this poem..But this poem isn't about me, Its inspired by a friend. So since she doesn't write poetry, I take her emotions and express them through my poetry. Perhaps I should have put "Dedicated to a friend" But thank you for the thought. Keep that pen movin TwistedBeauty!

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tretre says:

Thank you TamaraD, for showing your love...Glad you could relate. Keep that pen movin TamaraD!

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twistedbeauty says:

I understand I do the same you can just pass the encouragement on to her

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