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thatygpoetickidd
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lightness in the dark
wonder if i should free write

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whats holding me

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When the night sets in and when everybody is asleep
Not a sound or a peep it’s completely quite you can even
Hear the thoughts resonate from the back of your head
Should you go to bed? Or stay up and let your spirit intertwine
An inline itself with the sine you’re surrounded by physically you
Are alone but mentally your trapped in a room where good & bad
Suggestions form a meeting that you just wish to get out of one
Of The Voices yell I WANT FREEDOM LET ME BE ME! And another
Whispers why are you yelling? That is very unnecessary we can
All can hear you just fine and then it gets quite an unfamiliar voice
Tells everyone to take their seats you leave your mindset to come
Back to reality you get up but something pulls you down an evil sound
Forces you to go back into your mind * I didn’t say you could leave*
 

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Tali says:

I love your style of poetry....your creativity is truly blessed, never put the pen down!

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