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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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now that my eyes are open
I see that the past has gone away
balled up and thrown away
I had so much to say
all the word that I kept stored away
believing in tomorrow yesterday
these are my mistakes
inside my heart is where it aches
I’ll shed a tear for every year
move on until I disappear
the world is turned upside down
I’m no longer standing on the ground
what did I do wrong?
always trying to take the blame
standing in the storm
my shame causes me pain
like cancer I want to cut out my name
memories I no longer want to
remember or reclaim

 

 

 

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royale jones says:

deep! I felt that Dom.

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beafaithful says:

I feel the emotion in this, Great poem!
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2b2b2 says:

Gripping.....Bravo....ONE
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tretre says:

I felt every word of this poem. I really liked the beginning of the poem a lot. Beautiful work. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!

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