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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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Lifes Painting:

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 In the studio he stood,

painting with a drunken passion,

upon a fantastically over grown canvas,

set upon the wooden easel.

Operating on the edge of his sensiblities,

I thought surely  a madman he just be,

for his picture overwhelmed my eyes.

A chaos of hues in revolution,

mixed about like shooting stars or fireworks,

against the background of a delicate web,

Half struggling in a pool of gloom,

half illuminated by the brighest flames,

of sunshine.

I stood fixed in my gaze upon his creation,

feeling both capitivated and perplexed,

disturbed and exhilarated by this spectacle

before my eyes,

Wondering aloud to the master,

what muse could be the inspiration of

such genius, he rested his brush upon

the palette of colors turned his solitary

figure towards mine and said

"I call it life".

 

 

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2b2b2 says:

Fantastic Capture....Very Nice....ONE

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jcf108 says:

THANK YOU so much for your poetic inspirational passion and for your feedback and encouragement of me too!

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