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lightness in the dark
"Don't just think it, Ink It!!!!"

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Just Once:

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 Just once let your heart be ever so gently, and

peacefully touched by the beauty of mine,

Cover your inward self with the finely threaded lace

of my love, as it grows more precious with time.

 

Just once listen to the vibration of my heart,

pulsing out the breath of life, with strong vigor,

Sound out the syllables rhythmically; they are

transmitting a message, with such hmming fervor.

 

Just once, feel the closeness that surrounds, even in

Friendship, our two beings,

Don't block out my spiritual feelings so rare; touch,

experience and feel great things.

 

Just once, select from my menu, and taste the delicate,

tender feelings I have for you prepared,

They were destined to be slowly savored, while nurturing

the soul, and with you, unselfishly shared.

 

Just once, can't you for a change bend your rules, and

be lead down the path of your heart's instincts,

Allowing yourself to admit, to what your own heart and

mind often secretly dream and think.

 

Just once, recongnize, verify and realize my feelings,

as they speak freely of their own volition,

They are surrendered, unrestricted, unchained; I have

placed no limit, not even a condition.

 

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odonko-ba says:

A strong write. I really enjoyed reading this.
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tretre says:

Thank you Odonko! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this poem. I really appreciate the love. Keep that pen movin Odonko!

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